User talk:Merryj3000

Please review the American Dad! Wiki:Editing Policy. You may not alter existing content without discussing it first, you may only make spelling corrections. I'll review the entry about "Cheeto's" because that may be based on the package in the show, not the real product. --Buckimion (talk) 13:03, January 22, 2015 (UTC)

I began editing to correct the many grammatical errors in the plot, and in the process noticed some disrepancies as well as some pertinent info that was left out. I did read the editing policy and admit that I did rewrite some info, but not to fit my needs...it was rewritten for the general reader to better understand. If you would like a copy of my edited version to compare with what is written, I will gladly provide it so that you can decide whether or not my changes are needed.

Merryj3000 (talk) 13:28, January 22, 2015 (UTC)

I have everything that I need at my fingertips, thank you. --Buckimion (talk) 13:31, January 22, 2015 (UTC)

You're very welcome, however the fact still remains that there are tons of grammatical and punctuation errors in the plot. Also, there is definitely no apostrophe on the Cheetos bag, which was indeed referring to the actual product, seeing as though Stan questions the Cheetah on the front. This was confirmed after rewatching the episode just now.

Merryj3000 (talk) 13:51, January 22, 2015 (UTC)

I reviewed both of your edits earlier and while Mini Mart was reinstated as a spelling correction, I strongly disagree with your claim of "Joint Custody" being limited to grammar fixes. I have lifted your block, but repeat that you are to stick to misspellings. --Buckimion (talk) 17:40, January 22, 2015 (UTC)

Joint Custody Corrections
 I don't know if it's possible to send a private message, so please excuse my ignorance and accept my apology for leaving such a long talk message. Per the [http://americandad.wikia.com/wiki/American_Dad%21_Wiki:Editing_Policy American Dad! Wiki:Editing Policy ], "We encourage new information ..." and "If you wish to question the accuracy or wording of a statement, you may do so on the talk pages and it will be investigated or discussed." Therefore, aside from rewording the entire plot, here are some necessary corrections that are solely based on grammar, continuity, and pertinent episode information.

        1. “However, this leads to Jeff moving in with the Smiths, so that he begins to annoy Stan more than ever.”

o    This sentence implies that Jeff moved in with the Smiths for the sole purpose of annoying Stan more than ever when in fact, Jeff beginning to annoy Stan more than ever is just a by-product of him moving in with the Smiths. A better way to relay this would be to replace “so that” with “and.” (“However, this leads to Jeff moving in with the Smiths and he begins to annoy Stan more than ever.”)

       2. ‘Roger does some searching on the Internet, and discovers that Jeff is wanted in Florida for possession of marijuana, but that he had skipped bail.”

o    <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">Jeff is actually wanted in Florida for possession of marijuana “because” he skipped bail.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; text-indent:-.25in"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family: Symbol;mso-bidi-font-family:Symbol"> <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:Symbol;mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">       <span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman";mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">3. “Roger wants to do so as well, if solely for the money, so he can buy more disguises.”

<p class="MsoNormalCxSpMiddle" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto;margin-left:1.0in;mso-add-space:auto;text-indent:-.25in"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Courier New"; mso-bidi-font-family:"Courier New"">o <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Courier New";mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">   <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">Money hasn’t been discussed and the fact that Jeff has a bounty on his head was never included, so the reader may not know what money the writer is referring to.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; text-indent:-.25in"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family: Symbol;mso-bidi-font-family:Symbol"> <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:Symbol;mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">       4. <span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman";mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">“Roger winds up catching up to them, and reveals to Jeff Stan's plan to turn him in;”

<p class="MsoNormalCxSpMiddle" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto;margin-left:1.0in;mso-add-space:auto;text-indent:-.25in"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Courier New"; mso-bidi-font-family:"Courier New"">o <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Courier New";mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">   <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">Roger never revealed anything to Jeff directly; Jeff merely overhears Roger and Stan talking about their plan.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; text-indent:-.25in"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family: Symbol;mso-bidi-font-family:Symbol"> <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:Symbol;mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">       <span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman";mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">5. “Roger winds up catching up to them, and reveals to Jeff Stan's plan to turn him in; Jeff manages to escape from both of them, and Stan goes in pursuit, after disabling Roger's motorcycle.”

<p class="MsoNormalCxSpMiddle" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto;margin-left:1.0in;mso-add-space:auto;text-indent:-.25in"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Courier New"; mso-bidi-font-family:"Courier New"">o <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Courier New";mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">   <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">A semicolon is incorrect punctuation, as these two clauses are independent and belong in separate sentences.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; text-indent:-.25in"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family: Symbol;mso-bidi-font-family:Symbol"> <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:Symbol;mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">      6. <span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman";mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">“…Jeff manages to escape from both of them, and Stan goes in pursuit, after disabling Roger's motorcycle.”

<p class="MsoNormalCxSpMiddle" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto;margin-left:1.0in;mso-add-space:auto;text-indent:-.25in"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Courier New"; mso-bidi-font-family:"Courier New"">o <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Courier New";mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">   <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">It is necessary to mention that Jeff’s escape brings forth a new character to the show. O’Shamus McPherson has his own wiki page, but is not even mentioned in the episode in which he was introduced.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; text-indent:-.25in"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family: Symbol;mso-bidi-font-family:Symbol"> <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:Symbol;mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">       <span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman";mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">7. “Jeff flees to his father's farm in Raleigh, North Carolina, and calls Hayley; she and Francine decide to go and try to stop Stan.”

<p class="MsoNormalCxSpMiddle" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto;margin-left:1.0in;mso-add-space:auto;text-indent:-.25in"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Courier New"; mso-bidi-font-family:"Courier New"">o <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Courier New";mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">   <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">Again, no semicolon is needed.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; text-indent:-.25in"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family: Symbol;mso-bidi-font-family:Symbol"> <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:Symbol;mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">       <span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman";mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">8. “Klaus overhears, and calls both Stan and Roger to tell them where Jeff is; meanwhile, Francine cannot find the keys to her car, so Steve volunteers to hotwire it.”

<p class="MsoNormalCxSpMiddle" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto;margin-left:1.0in;mso-add-space:auto;text-indent:-.25in"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Courier New"; mso-bidi-font-family:"Courier New"">o <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Courier New";mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">   <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">Another semicolon error.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; text-indent:-.25in"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family: Symbol;mso-bidi-font-family:Symbol"> <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:Symbol;mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">       9. <span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman";mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">“Roger shows up again, and again reveals Stan's plan, this time to Mr. Fischer; Mr. Fischer ties both up, and declares that he intends to turn in Jeff himself for the reward money.”

<p class="MsoNormalCxSpMiddle" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto;margin-left:1.0in;mso-add-space:auto;text-indent:-.25in"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Courier New"; mso-bidi-font-family:"Courier New"">o <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Courier New";mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">   <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">Semicolon error.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; text-indent:-.25in"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family: Symbol;mso-bidi-font-family:Symbol"> <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:Symbol;mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">       <span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman";mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">10. “He leaves the two tied up and brings his son away to Florida, telling Jeff that he knows about the drug incident but that he intends to prove him innocent.”

<p class="MsoNormalCxSpMiddle" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto;margin-left:1.0in;mso-add-space:auto;text-indent:-.25in"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Courier New"; mso-bidi-font-family:"Courier New"">o <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Courier New";mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">   <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">Because we as readers are not part of the story and assumingly not all in Florida, the correct description should say that Mr. Fischer “takes” his son to Florida.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; text-indent:-.25in"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family: Symbol;mso-bidi-font-family:Symbol"> <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:Symbol;mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">       <span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman";mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">11. “Meanwhile, Stan and Roger manage to escape, but only after setting the barn full of cannabis on fire; as a result of smoke inhalation, the two become high and, while they go to rescue Jeff, they find themselves easily distracted.”

<p class="MsoNormalCxSpMiddle" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto;margin-left:1.0in;mso-add-space:auto;text-indent:-.25in"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Courier New"; mso-bidi-font-family:"Courier New"">o <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Courier New";mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">   <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">Semicolon error.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; text-indent:-.25in"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family: Symbol;mso-bidi-font-family:Symbol"> <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:Symbol;mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">       12. <span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman";mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">“Stan eventually realizes that the two are inebriated from the drugs, but they come to a DWI checkpoint.”

<p class="MsoNormalCxSpMiddle" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto;margin-left:1.0in;mso-add-space:auto;text-indent:-.25in"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Courier New"; mso-bidi-font-family:"Courier New"">o <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Courier New";mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">   <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">The sign actually read “DUI Checkpoint.”

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; text-indent:-.25in"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family: Symbol;mso-bidi-font-family:Symbol"> <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:Symbol;mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">       <span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman";mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">13. “Stan refuses to abandon his quest to save Jeff. However, as Stan had not known his own father growing up, he felt a connection and sympathy for Jeff.”

<p class="MsoNormalCxSpMiddle" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto;margin-left:1.0in;mso-add-space:auto;text-indent:-.25in"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Courier New"; mso-bidi-font-family:"Courier New"">o <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Courier New";mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">   <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">The word “however” should only be used to counteract the previous statement, and these two statements actually agree with each other. A better way to relay the sentiment would be, “Stan refuses to abandon his quest to save Jeff because Stan had not known his own father growing up and he felt a connection and sympathy for Jeff.”

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; text-indent:-.25in"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family: Symbol;mso-bidi-font-family:Symbol"> <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:Symbol;mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">       <span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman";mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">14. “Mr. Fischer is taken away for the drug charge and for attempting to murder Roger and Stan.”

<p class="MsoNormalCxSpMiddle" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto;margin-left:1.0in;mso-add-space:auto;text-indent:-.25in"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Courier New"; mso-bidi-font-family:"Courier New"">o <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Courier New";mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">   <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">Mr. Fischer never “attempted” to murder them; he only verbally threatened murder. Also, it is never mentioned exactly what he is arrested for, so that violates the editing policy that "Speculation is not permitted.”

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; text-indent:-.25in"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family: Symbol;mso-bidi-font-family:Symbol"> <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:Symbol;mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">       <span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman";mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">15. “Meanwhile, Steve attempts to hotwire Francine's car, but winds up getting electrocuted; when he claims afterwards to be able to "see" things, including the location of Francine's keys, a fact Francine attributes to delirium from his accident.”

<p class="MsoNormalCxSpMiddle" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto;margin-left:1.0in;mso-add-space:auto;text-indent:-.25in"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Courier New"; mso-bidi-font-family:"Courier New"">o <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Courier New";mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">   <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">Semicolon error

<p class="MsoNormalCxSpMiddle" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto;margin-left:1.0in;mso-add-space:auto;text-indent:-.25in"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Courier New"; mso-bidi-font-family:"Courier New"">o <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Courier New";mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">   <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">“…when he claims afterwards to be able to "see" things, including the location of Francine's keys, a fact Francine attributes to delirium from his accident” is not a complete sentence. Either remove the word “when” or remove “a fact” and add “it” after “attributes” (He claims afterwards to be able to “see” things…” or “…Francine attributes it to delirium from his accident.”)

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; text-indent:-.25in"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family: Symbol;mso-bidi-font-family:Symbol"> <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:Symbol;mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">      16. <span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman";mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">“The medical workers and firefighters believe that he has gained psychic powers from the accident, and help Steve over Hayley and Francine's objections to tear open the walls and floor of the house, where Steve believes the keys are.”

<p class="MsoNormalCxSpMiddle" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto;margin-left:1.0in;mso-add-space:auto;text-indent:-.25in"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Courier New"; mso-bidi-font-family:"Courier New"">o <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Courier New";mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">   <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">The medical workers were not part of Steve's "gift." The only person who helped Steve was the black fireman who was also in “Stanny Slickers 2” The Legend of Ollie’s Gold.”

<p class="MsoNormalCxSpMiddle" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto;margin-left:1.0in;mso-add-space:auto;text-indent:-.25in"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Courier New"; mso-bidi-font-family:"Courier New"">o <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Courier New";mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">   <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">The only thing that was destroyed was the wall, not the floor.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; text-indent:-.25in"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family: Symbol;mso-bidi-font-family:Symbol"> <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:Symbol;mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">       <span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman";mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">17. “They find nothing, but Steve winds up electrocuting himself again from wires in the walls, which leads him to "lose" his gift which he then realizes it was a curse.”

<p class="MsoNormalCxSpMiddle" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto;margin-left:1.0in;mso-add-space:auto;text-indent:-.25in"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Courier New"; mso-bidi-font-family:"Courier New"">o <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Courier New";mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">   <span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Times;mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">Quotation marks should be around “gift” seeing as though the gift is what he allegedly gained.

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For the last time...don't even think about it. You will find me a very nasty person if you push it further. --Buckimion (talk) 05:04, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Wow! I have absolutely no idea why you have such a nasty attitude about this. Again, these corrections were only introduced based on the editing guide. Why say that we can bring up new info and discuss them on the talk pages if you're just gonna get nasty about it? Nothing is being "pushed" here, and I am merely a fan of the show who wishes to relay the correct information to others. Did you even read the edits? There is some pertinent information that was either left out of the show, or described incorrectly. As I said, I apologize for leaving such a long talk message and even admitted that I am new to this and ignorant of some of the policies and procedures. I have been nothing but respectful to you, and have never come across as being rude or pushy, so instead of being rude to me, maybe give me some pointers as to the correct way to go about things in a cordial and respectful way.

Merryj3000 (talk) 09:21, January 24, 2015 (UTC)

Welcome
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Please leave a message on my talk page if I can help with anything! Buckimion (talk) 05:10, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

You talk too much
Keep your statements short and simple. I am not reading a novel. Now bug off. --Buckimion (talk) 12:24, February 1, 2015 (UTC)