Talk:Barry Robinson

Where does the surname Robinson come from?

I can't edit the page, but there should be an end quotation mark (") in between the Wolves]] and the comma in the source.Lyxson (talk) 20:15, November 3, 2014 (UTC)

Fixed & thanks. Certain pages are restricted for the first 24 hours after a new user resisters, but that shouldn't be a problem after tomorrow. --Buckimion (talk) 21:20, November 3, 2014 (UTC)

Can I change the structure of the first sentence slightly? Don't think the current grammar is appropriate. It should read: " Normally, Barry takes drugs that retard his criminal mind. As a result he is naive and slow, and struggles making moral choices." Let me know what you think, I am still locked out from editing this page. -Matt.strom (talk) 23:59, April 30, 2016 (UTC)

Perhaps, but I might suggest an additional comma after "result"... "Normally, Barry takes drugs that retard his criminal mind. As a result, he is naive and slow, and struggles making moral choices." Or not...what do you think? --Buckimion (talk) 00:04, May 1, 2016 (UTC)

Oops! I actually meant to have that in my suggestion. I'll go ahead and change that with that comma put in there. If I see additional changes like this that could be made, would you like me to continue to add them to the talk page, or just change them and then if you disagree we could discuss it on the talk page? Seems like we agree as far as what grammar/sentence structure sounds better for the most part, but I defer to you. -Matt.strom (talk) 00:07, May 1, 2016 (UTC)

Ok, but go slow. Radical change makes me twitchy. --Buckimion (talk) 00:09, May 1, 2016 (UTC)

Will do. Just drop me a line if I need to slow down or do anything differently. Thanks! -Matt.strom (talk) 00:13, May 1, 2016 (UTC)